True, things never seemed rushed, but there was never a sense of urgency either (partly because I wasn’t invested in the characters). NekoShogun: I did like that the story took its time setting up the mystery, but I didn’t think it made particularly effective use of said time. Other than the mystery itself, I did like the plot: it kept moving at a nice pace that felt safe in taking time to establish the mystery, and nothing seemed to drag on too long or get sped through–even if I was sometimes confused as to what everyone’s relations were to each other. It made contextual sense, since the protagonists aren’t detectives, but it made for a weak mystery. However, that has its own problem: while it wasn’t till the end, slightly before it was revealed to the characters, that I figured it out, I felt as if it was impossible to actually do so. I felt like the core concept was pretty interesting, but that the execution was a bit amateurish.ĮmotedLlama: While I agree it felt amateurish and that the clues were always obvious, I thought that it was a perfectly fine system when the audience didn’t have the entire cast of suspects ready at any particular moment since I had no one to suspect, I had no one to pin the evidence on and thus no way to figure out the mystery. NekoShogun: I have mixed feelings about the plot the actual elements of the mystery were decent, but the presentation of the clues felt a bit too heavy handed a lot of the time, and there were no red hearings to speak of, so it was always pretty clear what was important and what wasn’t. "Don't mind me, I'm just fixing this car with my wrench."
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